6. Punctuation — Every Mark, Rules & Punctuate-the-Passage Drills

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2–3 of the sentence-correction items are always punctuation, and the grammar question sometimes asks you to punctuate a passage. Poor punctuation is also named in FPSC examiner reports as a general weakness across scripts.

1. Full Stop ( . )

• End of statements and commands. After abbreviations only when the last letter isn't included (British style): Dr, Mr, Mrs, St (no stop) vs e.g., i.e., etc., Prof.
• Never after an indirect question: ❌ He asked who I was? → ✅ He asked who I was.

2. Comma ( , ) — eight rules

1. Series: Wheat, rice, cotton and sugarcane are major crops. (Oxford comma before and optional — be consistent.)
2. Before FANBOYS joining two independent clauses: The plan was sound, but it failed.
3. After introductory words, phrases, clauses: However, … / In 1947, … / When the rain stopped, …
4. Non-defining relative clauses & appositives: Gwadar, a deep-sea port, lies in Balochistan.
5. Direct address: Sir, your file is ready.
6. Before/after direct speech: He said, "Wait." / "Wait," he said.
7. Dates and places: On 14 August 1947, Pakistan emerged. Quetta, Balochistan, is cold in winter.
8. Contrasting elements / tag questions: It was the minister, not the secretary, who signed. You are coming, aren't you?

Comma errors: comma splice (It was late, we left); comma between subject and verb (❌ The people of this area, are poor); comma before a defining clause (❌ Students, who cheat, will be expelled — changes meaning to "all students cheat").

3. Semicolon ( ; )

• Join closely related independent clauses: Some work to live; others live to work.
• Before however, therefore, moreover, consequently, nevertheless joining clauses (comma after).
• Separate list items that already contain commas: The delegates came from Lahore, Punjab; Peshawar, KP; and Quetta, Balochistan.

4. Colon ( : )

• After a complete sentence to introduce a list, explanation, example or quotation: Success needs three things: talent, effort and luck.
• Between title and subtitle; in time (10:30); in ratios (3:1); after a formal salutation in US letters.
• ❌ After a verb or preposition: The winners are: … / consists of: …

5. Apostrophe ( ’ )

6. Quotation Marks, Question & Exclamation Marks

• Direct speech begins with a capital; comma or colon introduces it: He said, "We shall win."
• Punctuation that belongs to the quotation goes inside: She asked, "Are you ready?" When the whole sentence is the question: Did he say "tomorrow"?
• Single quotes for a quotation inside a quotation: He said, "Iqbal wrote 'Khudi' as a central idea."
• Exclamation marks: one only, never with a full stop; avoid in formal writing except in genuine exclamations.

7. Hyphen ( - ) and Dash ( — )

• Hyphen: compound adjectives before a noun (a well-known writer, a five-year plan, up-to-date data — but the data is up to date); numbers 21–99; fractions (two-thirds); some prefixes (ex-minister, self-reliance, anti-American).
• No hyphen after -ly adverbs: ❌ a highly-educated man → ✅ a highly educated man.
• Dash: an abrupt break or emphatic addition — He had one fault — pride. Paired dashes can replace brackets.

8. Capital Letters

Start of sentences; I; proper nouns (people, places, institutions: the Supreme Court, the National Assembly); days, months, festivals (Monday, Ramazan, Eid); nationalities & languages (Pakistani, Urdu); titles before names (Prime Minister Khan but the prime minister said); first and important words in titles. Not seasons (winter) or directions used generally (go north but the North-West Frontier).

9. Drill A — Punctuate these sentences

1. alas my friend is dead
2. the teacher said boys be quiet
3. we need the following items pens paper and ink
4. the students books were lying on the floor
5. if you work hard you will pass
6. my brother who is a doctor lives in abbottabad
7. its time the country took care of its farmers
8. were going to lahore on friday arent you coming

• Key

  1 Alas! My friend is dead. · 2 The teacher said, "Boys, be quiet." · 3 We need the following items: pens, paper and ink. · 4 The students' books were lying on the floor. · 5 If you work hard, you will pass. · 6 My brother, who is a doctor, lives in Abbottabad. · 7 It's time the country took care of its farmers. · 8 We're going to Lahore on Friday; aren't you coming?

10. Drill B — Punctuate the passage

one day the king called his minister and asked what is the most precious thing in the world the minister thought for a while and replied your majesty it is time for once lost it can never be regained the king was pleased with the answer

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  One day, the king called his minister and asked, "What is the most precious thing in the world?" The minister thought for a while and replied, "Your Majesty, it is time, for once lost, it can never be regained." The king was pleased with the answer.

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📜 CSS Past Papers 2016–2026 — Punctuation Solved (Q5a, 5 marks)

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Asked most years since 2016. 2016 was a choose-the-mark MCQ format; 2017 and 2019 gave a story to punctuate; 2018 gave five separate unpunctuated sentences; 2020 onward gave one continuous unpunctuated paragraph. Usually one unpunctuated paragraph; 2024 gave 8 separate sentences ("without splitting a sentence or adding/changing any word"). Marks come from: sentence boundaries, capitals, commas after introductory phrases, commas around non-defining phrases, semicolons before however/moreover, quotation marks, apostrophes, and colons introducing explanations. Rewrite the whole text neatly; don't mark corrections on the question.

CSS 2016 — choose the punctuation mark (MCQ format)

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  1. "It isn't fair!" shouted Martin. **"**Coach Lewis never lets me start the game!" — missing opening quotation mark.
  2. Maureen's three sisters, Molly, Shannon**,** and Patricia**,** are all spending the summer at their grandmother's beach house. — commas close the appositive list on both sides.
  3. For the centrepieces, the florist recommended the following flowers**:** daisies, tulips, daffodils, and hyacinths. — colon introduces the list after a complete clause.
  4. Lily is an accomplished gymnast**;** she won three medals in her last competition. — semicolon joins two independent clauses (comma-splice fix).
  5. Everyone was shocked when Max Smithfield**—a studious, extremely bright high school senior—**decided that college was not for him. — dashes set off the interrupting appositive.

CSS 2017 (the Quaker and the highwayman)

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  A Quaker was one day walking on a country road. He was suddenly met by a highwayman pointing a pistol. The man exclaimed, "Your money or your life!" "My friend," said the Quaker, "I cannot deliver my money, for I should be helping thee in evildoing. However, exchange is lawful, and I will give thee my purse for the pistol." The robber agreed. On receiving the purse, the Quaker at once held the pistol at the robber's head and said, "Now, friend, my purse back, or the weapon may go off!" "Fire!" said the robber. "There is no powder in the pistol."

  Points scored: quotation marks round each speaker's words, comma before each quoted sentence, apostrophe in robber's, exclamation marks on the threats.

CSS 2018 — five separate sentences (not a passage)

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  1. There is a slavery that no legislation can abolish**:** the slavery of caste.
  2. All that I am**,** all that I hope to be**,** I owe to my angel mother.
  3. "Take away that bauble**,**" said Cromwell, pointing to the mace which lay upon the table.
  4. There is only one cure for the evils which newly acquired freedom produces**,** and that cure is freedom.
  5. History**,** it has been said**,** is the essence of innumerable biographies.

CSS 2019 (the lion, the donkey and the rooster)

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  A hungry lion slipped out of the forest into a barnyard one evening when he saw a plump donkey. His mouth began to water, but just as he was ready to jump on the donkey, a rooster crowed. He was frightened and so turned away into the forest again. "Hey, look at that cowardly lion!" the donkey brayed to the rooster. "I am going to chase him." And the donkey ran after the lion. "Wait!" the rooster shouted. "You don't know that—" But it was too late; the lion had turned and killed the donkey. "Ah, my poor, stupid friend," the rooster said, as he watched the lion eating the donkey, "the lion wasn't afraid of you, but of my crowing."

  Points scored: quotation marks for every line of dialogue, apostrophes in don't and wasn't, semicolon before the lion had turned, commas round the interrupting the rooster said.

CSS 2020

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  Letters between relatives and friends are called personal letters. The most important thing in such letters is the content. Don't begin with a hackneyed phrase like "I was delighted to get your letter", "Received your letter" or "I have often thought of writing to you". Use a vigorous, clear, chatty style.

  Points scored: 4 sentence breaks, quotation marks round each stock phrase, comma between coordinate adjectives (vigorous, clear, chatty).

CSS 2021 (Samuel Johnson)

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  That familiarity produces neglect has been long observed. The effect of all external objects, however great or splendid, ceases with their novelty. The courtier stands without emotion in the royal presence; the rustic tramples under his foot the beauties of the spring, with little attention to their fragrance; and the inhabitant of the coast darts his eye upon the immense diffusion of waters without awe, wonder or terror.

  Note: the paper printed "the music" — in Johnson's original it is "the rustic" (a villager). Punctuate what is printed; the structure is identical. Semicolons separate the three parallel examples because the third contains internal commas.

CSS 2022

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  Unfortunately, we often miss a basic school lesson: every big task consists of several small ones done precisely and perfectly. As a nation, we acutely need to learn the art of breaking down our moonlit goals into small, accomplishable tasks. It will reduce frustration, anxiety and depression in society, and embarrassment for the government machinery too, as they don't have to defend their unkept promises.

  Points scored: capital U, comma after Unfortunately and As a nation, colon before the explanation, apostrophe in don't.

CSS 2023 (Nasreddin Hodja story — dialogue)

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  While taking a nap on the porch one hot summer day, Hodja dreamed that a stranger promised to give him ten pieces of gold. The stranger placed them in Hodja's hand one by one until he reached the tenth piece, which he hesitated to give him. "Come on! What are you waiting for?" said Hodja. "You promised me ten." Just then he woke up. He immediately looked at his hand and saw that it was empty. He quickly shut his eyes again, stretched out his hand and said, "All right, I'll settle for nine."

  Points scored: capital for the proper noun Hodja (keep the paper's spelling "Hodga" if you prefer), possessive Hodja's, quotation marks and question mark inside them, capital I and apostrophe in I'll.

CSS 2024 — eight separate sentences

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  1. The cordless vacuum, one of the least interesting of the household appliances, got its start as a moon drill. — commas round the appositive.
  2. Dr. Seuss books are famous for their delightful rhymes and nonsense words; If I Ran a Zoo, however, likely gave us the real word "nerd". — semicolon (no splitting allowed), title in italics, word-as-word in quotes.
  3. …including rabies, alcoholism, and a truly strange possibility: he may have been a victim of a voter fraud scheme.
  4. The film critic said, "One of the most misquoted lines in movie history is 'Play it again, Sam.'" — single quotes inside double.
  5. Poorly named animals include the flying fox, which is really a bat; the electric eel, which is really a knifefish; and the honey badger, which is the only member of its genus and species! — remove the colon after include; semicolons separate items that contain commas.
  6. The Haskell Opera House sits right on the US–Canadian border, with the stage in Quebec and many of the seats in Vermont.
  7. Most carnivorous plants attract and digest insects and other invertebrates, but some large pitcher plants have been known to digest frogs, rodents, and other vertebrates.
  8. Harvey is a good driver; moreover, he is a very friendly one.

CSS 2025

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  In Pakistani folklore, Heer Ranjha, Sohni Mahiwal and Sassi Punnu are iconic tales of star-crossed lovers. These stories, deeply rooted in tribal connections, serve as allegories and commentaries on spiritual and romantic love; they explore the complexities of human emotion, the trials of love and the transformative power of spiritual elevation. The themes of trial, emotional anguish, separation and expulsion, resulting in the moral polishing of the lovers, are timeless and universal. Heer Ranjha's epic tale, penned by Waris Shah, is a masterpiece of Punjabi literature — a testament to the power of love to transcend mortal bounds.

  Note: replace the stray "…" with a full stop; underline the three titles in handwriting (italics aren't possible on paper).

CSS 2026

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  Scientists and philosophers of science tend to speak as if "scientific language" were intrinsically precise, as if those who use it must understand one another's meaning even if they disagree. But, in fact, scientific language is not as different from ordinary language as is commonly believed; it, too, is subject to imprecision and ambiguity and, hence, to imperfect understanding. Moreover, new theories or arguments are rarely, if ever, constructed by way of clear-cut steps of induction, deduction and verification or falsification; neither are they defended, rejected or accepted in so straightforward a manner. In practice, scientists combine the rules of scientific methodology with a generous admixture of intuition, aesthetics and philosophical commitment. The importance of what are sometimes called extra-rational or extra-logical components of thought in the discovery of a new principle or law is generally acknowledged.

  Points scored: parenthetical commas (in fact, too, hence, if ever), semicolons joining related clauses, comma after Moreover and In practice, series commas.